Feedback on Outline of the story

I had a discussion with people about what they think of my story outline.

• A teenager descibed the outline as interesting and would like to watch the film.
• A classmate of mine described my story outline as good but in order to make the genre of the film fall into comedy instead of romance I could involve drama by showing problems in a typical teenagers lives and also involve jokes in the script to make it funnier and will therefore fall into the genre of comedy.
• A student from my media lesson said that she likes how the film is about young people as it is likely to target that type of audience. She also likes the cliffhanger at the end of the outline because it makes her want to find out what will happen in the film and she likes the way I made the situation seem serious even though it is about young people and love.